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Post by Loralya on Feb 7, 2004 13:36:43 GMT -5
Dragon Tears O' so bold and noble dragon, what troubles you this night? Your voice no longer singing, your wings do not take flight. Can it be that darkness comes, are you ill with fright? I hear afar the battle drums, evil deeds shall come this night. Tears run down your mighty face, what beith in your sight? Your wings unfurl like silver lace, I know you'll do what's right.
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Post by Loralya on Feb 7, 2004 13:50:17 GMT -5
Life's Struggle A dragon's breath on a summers eve, what once was great now must leave. A lover is lost and a child born, what else is there which we must scorn. A father's hatred and a mother's care, which shall make it to the dragon's lair? Battles fought and wars begun, men once friends who now are shuned. Evil is won and peace is lost, now we shall suffer the bitter frost. A cry for battle now far away, the rising armies begin to sway. Once mighty walls come crumbling down, A once proud king has lost his crown. Brave men lost in battles won, Fearless men who now are gone. The silent watcher ever stalking, Passing through gates slowly walking. Memories past flow through your mind, Silently hoping that we'll be fine. Mother's sing and children cry, shall we live or shall we die?
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Post by Iluvatar on Feb 9, 2004 23:03:16 GMT -5
Oh wow my friend those were really,...wow... hmm i dont know what to say but,....... wow!! they were really good!! and you were telling me that they were bad!! You need to apreciate your own work there!
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Post by Idunno on Feb 10, 2004 21:58:31 GMT -5
Interesting, in a very scary way.
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Post by Loralya on Feb 11, 2004 12:25:26 GMT -5
Mwahahaha! Yes, I am very scary! Jos, thx, but they're not that good. But again, thx mellon-nin.
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Post by Megs on Feb 14, 2004 21:07:06 GMT -5
That was awesome, I was the one that read it before you posted it. It was great, you'll do really good if you publish some of your poems. Unlike mine your's are royalty
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Post by Iluvatar on Feb 14, 2004 21:08:27 GMT -5
I still think they are good!!! Dont ever put your self down like that ever again!!! ;D
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Post by Lephanon on Feb 15, 2004 20:43:14 GMT -5
Your poems are beautiful (clap, clap, clap!!!!). You should write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;D ;D
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Post by Loralya on Feb 15, 2004 21:16:49 GMT -5
;D *gives a bow* Thank you, thank you! You are all too kind. Ok, now for another, it just popped into my head a few minutes ago and I just had to write it.
I Look and See I look about me and I do laugh, so much chaos mine eyes do see, these simpletons do wander 'bout, looking for the better life on yonder, do thine eyes doth not beseech, What lies within every mortals reach? Take your life for what it it, look not for the easier way beyond, take not what you have for granted, treasure each moment as thy last, take in every detail life sends your way. Keep those whom you love close, always have them in thine heart, never lose hope though the days do darken, keep faith in every second you take, and remember that I shall sit here always, laughing at your petty veiws till the end of my days.
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Post by Luthien on Feb 15, 2004 22:57:31 GMT -5
Ya have some pretty good poems my dearest friend, what do you think about this one, inspired by you As the dragon breathes on this summers's ever as it destroys the land below as the dragon draws near the women and children fill with fear as the men head to battle and fight the dragon shows no sign of fright They fight for bravery and honor in this, there is no favor as they run for their lives the dragon makes massive dives the children scream wishing it to be a bad dream many fled into dark dwelling caves thinking, with just one blow they all could be doomed to their graves believing that the dragon had fled there he sits above their head coming out from hiding he sits above waiting and deciding to approach slow or, let off a red hot glow Many lay dead from the massive beast above head as they turn back There lies overhead something black Is this we're they shall die until the end of time? what do you think about that??? Is it Good
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Post by Loralya on Feb 17, 2004 12:27:36 GMT -5
Very good! You should try to write some more, you have very good form.
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Post by Luthien on Feb 22, 2004 19:18:49 GMT -5
This poem has nothing to do w/ LOTR, but aman read it and said it was fantastico!! ;D So many years of neglection has changed the appearance of you reflection Fron the Princess w/ loads of cash to looking like trailer trash from being an all-time sports star now your life consist of hanging at the bar people said you could have had everything now they think your a low down nothing see how one bad decision changed your dreams your not even allowed to watch the school teams you may think this can't happen to you That's what this kid who had everthing said too Just because your popular doesn't mean your decisions have to be popular make the right decisions no matter what you do Cause this kid could just be you ---------------------------------------------------------------- Here's another one Just playin around being pushed to the ground being pointed and laughed at saying, "I'll get you back!" As the days go on thinking they all could be gone what was games and fun ends with shots from a gun with the rise to the head "With one shot, I could be dead, End all my fears and pain, Now what can those bullies gain?" I know my poems are so depressing, but hey you have to start somewhere. ;D
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Post by valaraukar on Mar 3, 2004 19:03:38 GMT -5
how about this one loralya
There are plenty of good-byes Plenty of hugs given A girl with tears in her eyes Doesn’t know how she’ll go on livin’.
Cause this is not the old way. This is not her cryin’ She has new things to say And inside she’s dyin’
And she isn’t anything like she was She smiles but she doesn’t know why she does
She isn’t anything like she was And she’ll change this way again.
Alone she was so cold But they took her in and held her Now she has been told Things won’t be the way they were
But she can’t remember How she used to see That last December The way things used to be.
And she isn’t anything like she was She smiles but she doesn’t know why she does
She isn’t anything like she was And she’ll change this way again.
She reached the top Then flew back down Didn’t want to stop Wouldn’t turn around.
Now that she’s made it, where does she go from here? Back on the normal Earth, things seem so queer!
And she isn’t anything like she was She smiles but she doesn’t know why she does
She isn’t anything like she was And she’ll change this way again.
There are plenty of good-byes Plenty of hugs given A girl with tears in her eyes Doesn’t know how she’ll go on livin’.
How will I go on livin’?
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Post by Luthien on Mar 3, 2004 21:13:32 GMT -5
That was very good Valaraukar! ;D ;D ;D
Here's some
All has come to this day when no one knows when all will fade The seasons come the seasons go when all is done all will slow
Time has come to set away To save this land for another day To die and parish before the sun When this land soon be done
Many have fought and gave their life To set another day for another life As the sun goes up and comes down Another King will be aground
All has come to this day When no one knows when all will fade The seasons come the seasons go When all is done all will slow
To Set aside another day will cause the dreams to fade away When all is lost and dreams are torn They'll be an evil face showing no scorn
No one will know what seemed to turn but only what is seen in the burn So much evil in the air will give anyone a frightful scare
markings are shown as bright as gold this is what the tale has told so much evil lies within so much truth, but such a sin
to set aside another day will cause the dreams to fade away when all is lost and dreams are torn they'll be an evil face showing no scorn
(That was really long.)
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Post by valaraukar on Mar 3, 2004 21:31:34 GMT -5
i just got one from the top of my head
The Cave Why can’t I hear my heart? The beating has just stopped To end it all With the breaking of a drum Ah, it’s cold in here Alone and left behind The shadows of friends Taunt me, and I curl up Hoping to die But alas, I awake again The dawn is here Mocking me in my Self-provided darkness So I go back to the cave To wallow in self-pity Hoping pathetically That someone will come Pull me out But I’m still here Because no one ever cares.
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