Loralys'a Poetry (scary)

[Loralya]

Dragon Tears
O' so bold and noble dragon,
what troubles you this night?
Your voice no longer singing,
your wings do not take flight.
Can it be that darkness comes,
are you ill with fright?
I hear afar the battle drums,
evil deeds shall come this night.
Tears run down your mighty face,
what beith in your sight?
Your wings unfurl like silver lace,
I know you'll do what's right.

[Loralya]

Life's Struggle
A dragon's breath on a summers eve,
what once was great now must leave.
A lover is lost and a child born,
what else is there which we must scorn.
A father's hatred and a mother's care,
which shall make it to the dragon's lair?
Battles fought and wars begun,
men once friends who now are shuned.
Evil is won and peace is lost,
now we shall suffer the bitter frost.
A cry for battle now far away,
the rising armies begin to sway.
Once mighty walls come crumbling down,
A once proud king has lost his crown.
Brave men lost in battles won,
Fearless men who now are gone.
The silent watcher ever stalking,
Passing through gates slowly walking.
Memories past flow through your mind,
Silently hoping that we'll be fine.
Mother's sing and children cry,
shall we live or shall we die?

[Iluvatar]

Oh wow my friend those were really,...wow... hmm i dont know what to say but,....... wow!! they were really good!! and you were telling me that they were bad!! You need to apreciate your own work there!

[Idunno]

Interesting, in a very scary way.

[Loralya]

Mwahahaha! Yes, I am very scary! Jos, thx, but they're not that good. But again, thx mellon-nin.

[Megs]

That was awesome, I was the one that read it before you posted it. It was great, you'll do really good if you publish some of your poems. Unlike mine your's are royalty

[Iluvatar]

I still think they are good!!! Dont ever put your self down like that ever again!!! ;D

[Lephanon]

Your poems are beautiful (clap, clap, clap!!!!). You should write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;D ;D

[Loralya]

;D *gives a bow* Thank you, thank you! You are all too kind. Ok, now for another, it just popped into my head a few minutes ago and I just had to write it.

I Look and See
I look about me and I do laugh,
so much chaos mine eyes do see,
these simpletons do wander 'bout,
looking for the better life on yonder,
do thine eyes doth not beseech,
What lies within every mortals reach?
Take your life for what it it,
look not for the easier way beyond,
take not what you have for granted,
treasure each moment as thy last,
take in every detail life sends your way.
Keep those whom you love close,
always have them in thine heart,
never lose hope though the days do darken,
keep faith in every second you take,
and remember that I shall sit here always,
laughing at your petty veiws till the end of my days.

[Luthien]

Ya have some pretty good poems my dearest friend, what do you think about this one, inspired by you

As the dragon breathes
on this summers's ever
as it destroys the land below
as the dragon draws near
the women and children fill with fear
as the men head to battle and fight
the dragon shows no sign of fright
They fight for bravery and honor
in this, there is no favor
as they run for their lives
the dragon makes massive dives
the children scream
wishing it to be a bad dream
many fled into dark dwelling caves
thinking, with just one blow
they all could be doomed to their graves
believing that the dragon had fled
there he sits above their head
coming out from hiding
he sits above waiting and deciding
to approach slow
or, let off a red hot glow
Many lay dead
from the massive beast above head
as they turn back
There lies overhead something black
Is this we're they shall die
until the end of time?

what do you think about that??? Is it Good

[Loralya]

Very good! You should try to write some more, you have very good form.

[Luthien]

This poem has nothing to do w/ LOTR, but aman read it and said it was fantastico!! ;D

So many years of neglection
has changed the appearance of you reflection
Fron the Princess w/ loads of cash
to looking like trailer trash
from being an all-time sports star
now your life consist of hanging at the bar
people said you could have had everything
now they think your a low down nothing
see how one bad decision changed your dreams
your not even allowed to watch the school teams
you may think this can't happen to you
That's what this kid who had everthing said too
Just because your popular
doesn't mean your decisions have to be popular
make the right decisions no matter what you do
Cause this kid could just be you
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Here's another one

Just playin around
being pushed to the ground
being pointed and laughed at
saying, "I'll get you back!"
As the days go on
thinking they all could be gone
what was games and fun
ends with shots from a gun
with the rise to the head
"With one shot, I could be dead,
End all my fears and pain,
Now what can those bullies gain?"

I know my poems are so depressing, but hey you have to start somewhere. ;D

[valaraukar]

how about this one loralya

There are plenty of good-byes
Plenty of hugs given
A girl with tears in her eyes
Doesn’t know how she’ll go on livin’.

Cause this is not the old way.
This is not her cryin’
She has new things to say
And inside she’s dyin’

And she isn’t anything like she was
She smiles but she doesn’t know why she does

She isn’t anything like she was
And she’ll change this way again.

Alone she was so cold
But they took her in and held her
Now she has been told
Things won’t be the way they were

But she can’t remember
How she used to see
That last December
The way things used to be.

And she isn’t anything like she was
She smiles but she doesn’t know why she does

She isn’t anything like she was
And she’ll change this way again.

She reached the top
Then flew back down
Didn’t want to stop
Wouldn’t turn around.

Now that she’s made it, where does she go from here?
Back on the normal Earth, things seem so queer!

And she isn’t anything like she was
She smiles but she doesn’t know why she does

She isn’t anything like she was
And she’ll change this way again.

There are plenty of good-byes
Plenty of hugs given
A girl with tears in her eyes
Doesn’t know how she’ll go on livin’.

How will I go on livin’?

[Luthien]

That was very good Valaraukar! ;D ;D ;D

Here's some

All has come to this day
when no one knows when all will fade
The seasons come the seasons go
when all is done all will slow

Time has come to set away
To save this land for another day
To die and parish before the sun
When this land soon be done

Many have fought and gave their life
To set another day for another life
As the sun goes up and comes down
Another King will be aground

All has come to this day
When no one knows when all will fade
The seasons come the seasons go
When all is done all will slow

To Set aside another day
will cause the dreams to fade away
When all is lost and dreams are torn
They'll be an evil face showing no scorn

No one will know what seemed to turn
but only what is seen in the burn
So much evil in the air
will give anyone a frightful scare

markings are shown as bright as gold
this is what the tale has told
so much evil lies within
so much truth, but such a sin

to set aside another day
will cause the dreams to fade away
when all is lost and dreams are torn
they'll be an evil face showing no scorn

(That was really long.)

[valaraukar]

i just got one from the top of my head



The Cave
Why can’t I hear my heart?
The beating has just stopped
To end it all
With the breaking of a drum
Ah, it’s cold in here
Alone and left behind
The shadows of friends
Taunt me, and I curl up
Hoping to die
But alas, I awake again
The dawn is here
Mocking me in my
Self-provided darkness
So I go back to the cave
To wallow in self-pity
Hoping pathetically
That someone will come
Pull me out
But I’m still here
Because no one ever cares.