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Post by Loralya on Sept 3, 2004 17:58:46 GMT -5
Hello there my dear friends.... I have decided that my personal notebook of poems is getting just a little to cluttered so I decided to put them on the computer for safe keeping. I would appreciate it if you would post here only to comment or criticise my work and not post work of your own. Thank you much and I hope you'll enjoy the works I have created. Many of them some of you have probably already seen but there are quite a few that I have never shown anyone before now... Thank you again. Loralya (Kendra)
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Post by Loralya on Sept 3, 2004 18:10:06 GMT -5
Body, Heart, and Soul...
Once there was a gallant knight wandering through lands unknown. And there he met a lovely maid, the fairest of them all.
She swayed him with her gentle eyes her voice was a soothing veil. She enchanted him with her every move, she had him in her thrall.
He gave her everything he had, his body, heart, and soul. He would follow her to every end, his life he would give for her.
She took him to her forest home and wrapped him in her arms. There he fell to peaceful sleep never to return.
He gave her everything he had, his body, heart, and soul. She took from him everything and in the end the knight did fall.
By, Kendra C.
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Post by Megs on Jan 14, 2005 13:54:01 GMT -5
That was really good, I congradulate you on your achievements.
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